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-JAKES POV-

I blindfolded Courtney and I lead her out through the back of the venue, everyone else had gone to the after party.

"Baby, where are you taking me?" she was stumbling around.

"Take your hand in mine" She said as i lead her.

"Its ours tonight Courtney" I unblinded her.

"oh ha ha" She laughed.

"Whatt? You like my little reference?" I laughed.

"Well...you wasnt joking when you said its ours tonight" she laughed pointing at the empty tourbus.

"You're an observant one arent you" I teased.

She giggled.

We got onto the bus and I lead her to the back.
I asked Sammi if she could make the bus look more...romantic.
It was amazing, she put beautiful red silk throws over the sofas and everything looked so much better.

"Jake...whats all this about?" She laughed.
"You...you like?" I asked.
"Of course I do...but you dont need to go to all this tro.."

I put my finger to her lips.

"Hush, lets just enjoy some 'us' time" I cuddled her.

We both snuggled up on the sofa for a few minutes, we were both tired from the concert.

"Baby...I love these little things, you're so thoughtful...im way to lucky to have you" Courtney said.

I squeezed her.
"Aww, its nothing, I love spending time with you.." I said as i hugged her.

I got up and went to the bus door.

-Whispers-

I walked back, a takeaway in one hand.

"Everything okay Jake? Who was that?" She asked.

"I got us food delivered, you know I cant cook!" I chuckled.

"Aww you shouldnt have!"

"Courtney, shush, I love you, and I wanted to, okay!" I nudged her.

She just glared at me.

"Your so cute when your mad" i winked.

"OI" she laughed.

-2 hours later-

*COURTNEYS POV*

"I wonder how the party is going...i bet Ash is knee deep in girls! I laughed.

"Hey, who cares about him or them? Im just glad I get to spend time with you." Jake smiled.

I cuddled him so hard.

All of a sudden he felt really hot, and sweaty.

"Jakkkeeeee, are you okay?" I asked.

I looked at him, he looked nervous.

"Yeah, never better..why?"

"You look....flustered." I said.

He got up and got a drink from the cooler. He put it on the side and came over to me.

"Courtney..."

"What is it?"

He was shaking...Now im worried.

"You know I love you..right?"

"...and i Love you Jake!" i replied.

What was it..I didnt know what to make of the situation...he was all over the place.

Then that was it.

He knelt down and reached into his pockets.

My heart started pounding, was he doing what I thought he was doing?

"Courtney...You've been the light at the end of my tunnel for years, when we parted all those
years ago...i never forgot you. There's never been anyone else like you, you are the only person that understands me.
I can be me and not have to be scared that you dont approve. When im up on stage, you give me the confidence, I am
nothing without you...please Courtney....Will you.."

At that moment the guys all ran in the bus, they were all drunk and stumbling around.

"OOOHH CHINESE FOOD, YAAHHHH PLEAASEE" CC shouted.

Jake got up, he was so angry.
I was just sat there, not knowing what to say or do.
Jake grabbed his jacket, stormed past the guys and walked off.

"JAKE...WAI"
It was too late, he was already out of distance.

"Did we walk in on something?" Andy laughed, and burped.
"FUNNILY E FUCKING NOUGH ANDY YEAH YOU BLOODY DID. YOU GUYS RUINED EVERYTHING!" I screamed.

Sammi got on the bus, and she saw me, she had seen what happened, she was speechless.

I kicked off my heels, put on some flats, grabbed my bag and ran off the bus.
I didnt wanna be in their company tonight, I dont know where I am or where I'll go.

Andy and Ash tried to stop me from leaving, all i could do was cry and i pushed them away.

I ran back into the venue, i still had my pass on and I went to the bar, the party was still on.

Thank god some familliar faces.
CH18!!!

I do hope you like it..sorry it took so long guys! :3

CH19: [link]
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TokisCat Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
haha thanks guys! I have an idea that Imma put in the next chapter, i think you'll like :3
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MamieWade Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Please don't give up Jake!!
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MamieWade Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the photo of Ashley you used is too sexy to talk about
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mscaspercat1 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011
definatley XD
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MamieWade Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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mscaspercat1 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
LOL CC i fucking love u XDD im so happy u uploaded, i was like YAY! its here lol
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Vampire-Kitty333 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nawwwww, poor courtney and poor jake
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mscaspercat1 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
u have to admit that that ws preety funny though XD
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Vampire-Kitty333 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah but now Jake is angry and Courtney has just run off to gosh knows where
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mscaspercat1 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
yer but im sure that she has run off and she will find jake and then jake will kick the guys asses and ask her again lol im sure knowing TokisCats amazing writing skill that everything w5ll work out just fine XD
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